Wednesday 29 October 2014

Play

Christmas Day World War Football Game



(It was wet and boggy. The soldiers were trying to keep warm in the trenches. It was dark, gloomy and still in no-man's-land. It was the year of 1914 - Christmas Day. There was a lonely German soldier in no man's-land.)
Hugo: (worriedly) Hey Tom! Why is that man out there alone?
Tom: I don't know.
Hugo: (excitedly) I'm going to see.
Tom: What…
Hugo: (interrupting) Hello, what is your name?
German: My - name - is - Fritz.
Hugo: My - name - is - Hugo.
Tom: (shouting) Hey Hugo, is he friendly because that other German over there is walking in no-man's land and he has a football.
Fritz: Hay, vy don't ve have a rest and play votball, instead of viting vor a day?
Hugo: (politely) Sergeant Jack, can we have a game of football for the day for Christmas?
Sergeant Jack: You are all dismissed for the day, do as you wish.
Fritz: I will ask my hofficer if ve can play.
Soon all the soldiers were scrambling out of their trenches (from both armies) and all of them had a great game. But for the next three years the fighting would go on again. And so it did. every night the alarm would sound and I would get no sleep. Football was what made me happy.
Hugo: Hey Tom, wanna play some footie?
Tom: Sure man okay il start this end you start that end.
Hugo: GOALLLLLL!
Tom: Yesssss! I win I win I win!
Hugo: Yes yes I know
Narrator: Hugo and Tom would play football everyday for their own entertainment because that is all that they had, both their fathers went to war and their mothers were the medical nurses fixing up the soldiers wounds so they were all by themselves.

Thursday 23 October 2014

Krystal

Q: WHo is the main character in this story


A:Krystal Bennett


Q: what was the person responsible of this crash on


A: P and Morphine


Q: How old was Krystal
A:19


Q: Where did this accident take place
A:River Road, Upper Hutt


Q: What does Krystal's mother say for advice
A:Never drive if you’ve taken any drugs


Q:how many other passengers were in the car with the drugged driver
A:3


Q: what did Krystal's mother call the drugged driver
A:Selfish and irresponsible


Q:What was Krystals rank for the top seller
A:57th

Q: how long was the drugged driver sentenced for mechanical manslaughter
A:6 ½

Sunday 19 October 2014

Fixing Writing

"MUM where are my favourite socks?"
I asked yelling for help "and where are my tuesday undies?"
asked dad searching through his drawers "You know I have to wear them today"
"Just wear Mondays undies no one is going to know"
replied mum "no one's going to know you say i'm going to know and to wear mondays undies pfft that would be idiotic"
dad answered back with a streak in his voice this was only the beginning of our family disaster. For the next few weeks things were starting to disappear and fast with dad losing his tuesday undies and me losing my favourite socks Isaac then lost his favourite bow tie while mum then lost her favorite dress we thought we were going mental 
"Its not like they could just hop up and run away"
said Isaac mum suggested that we recap our steps 
"When was the last time you had you items?"
she said we all replied 
"before washing day was the last time we had them so maybe its the washing machine thats caused all this drama"
mum said with a glimpse a hope in her eye so we checked the washing machine there was… nothing with nothing to prove I decided to put a GoPro in the machine to watch it in action to see if there was something suspicious really happening inside what I didn’t realise was that the washing machine would take my GoPro too AHHH ITS GONE I yelled at the top of my voice what are we going to do "Lets just give up" Mum said to me "Fine if that’s the best idea" I moaned. A few weeks later Isaac had dropped his toy car behind the washing machine and as we were looking for it a pair of undies popped up out of the blue just sitting there "Mum look!" I said with a big grin on my face who would have guessed we both stood there smiling.

Thursday 16 October 2014

Punchuating Writing

"Morning class," greeted Miss Green. It was an ordinary day and everyone was sitting at their wooden desks with pens and pencils by their side the sweet sound of voices filling the room brought music to my ears I decide to listen in on Britney's conversation with Ella "OMG, last night I reached into my bag to get out my book and it wasn’t there," explained Britney "No way," replied Ella "That exact thing happened to me I was sure I put it into my bag" this is a little strange I thought to myself why were things disappearing.


Eventually the bell went and it was time to go home. I told my mum what I had witnessed at school and she was lost for words. That night, I couldn't get Britney and Ella's conversation out of my head I grabbed my laptop out of my bag to google this mystery. As I unzipped the case I looked down only to see that there was no laptop in my bag 
"This is insane!"
I decided to look in my other pocket of my bag and to my surprise my lunch box was also missing!.


The sun was shining the birds, singing it seemed like an ordinary day. I walked into my class that is usually full of colour but not today my class looked like a prison cell "What happened" I gasped "Don't worry kids," assured miss green "We have a thief in our class and I am going to get to the bottom of this one by one" miss green started checking our bags everyone seemed relaxed except for James Miss Green made her way down the line and James was last to be checked "Oh" said Miss Green looking rather lost what is this she asked James as she pulled out two books a pencil case my laptop and two class posters from James's bag.


I was utterly shocked to say the least I am so sorry cried James its just that everyone has laptops or books and our class is so colourful that I wanted to take some of it home to make my house look better the truth is that you should be happy with what you have and not want stuff from other people.

Wednesday 15 October 2014

My Writing


It was a Monday morning I just got woken up by my mum to get ready for school I got out of bed and reached down for my uniform but it wasn't there I looked under my bed under my pillows but I couldn't find my uniform anywhere. 
"Kaidin have you gotten in the shower yet"
"No Mum I cant find my uniform"
"Well you better find it quick or you will be going to school in your onesie"
"But mum I cant find it anywhere it’s like its just disappeared"
"Oh sure just like all your other stuff huh kaidin".
I got a note to go to school with to say that my uniform is lost and that I have to wear mufti just for today which was a pain because every teacher I walked past asked why i'm in mufti and where my uniform is so I just showed them the note and moved on. when I got home I went to go grab my iPod from where I always put it but I looked and that wasn't there either I yelled out to my Mum "Mum have you seen my iPod?" "No but do you know where did you last put it?" "Mum if i knew where I last put it do you think id be asking you where it is?" "Sorry just trying to help". I thought to myself that ill try to find it later so I run into my room to go on my PS3 but surprise surprise it’s not there "Mum!"
"Oh what now Kaidin!"
"I know you're up to mischief tell me where all my stuff is!"
"Kaidin do you really think I would hide your uniform away from you so you would go to school in your onesise Now what’s gone missing now?"
"My PS3 the whole thing, the controller is here but not my HDMI cable, power cord or my Elgato".
I really couldn't be bothered looking for all my stuff because it will take me hours so i just thought of going for a bike ride I walk outside to get my bike and I couldn't believe it my bike had no tyres by this time I've had enough I went up to my mum and said "Mum I know you’ve put all my stuff somewhere please can I have it back?"
"Kaidin I have hidden your stuff away would you like to get it back?"
"Yes where is it where is it where is it!"
"Right here"
My mum led me to her bedroom where my stuff was all scattered around the room My PS3 the power cord, the HDMI and my Elgato my iPod was under her drawers and my bike tyres were under Liam's bed and  my uniform was in my mums drawers "Okay thanks mum for hiding my stuff thats okay" "Ill do it again sometime hahaha yeah right"

Monday 13 October 2014

Sassy And Clearance

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